Welcome to the 14th Hump Day Hook of 2013. In this blog hop, each author posts one paragraph from a book or WIP. Find a list of HDH authors here. Everyone would appreciate a comment and for their post to be liked and tweeted, using the hashtag #HDH. Join the FB page here.
The following is from KESTREL, a post apocalyptic dystopian WIP from NaNo 2011:
The demon snarled at me from behind the man’s eyes. His jaw showed a tendency to twitch, but other than that the refugee seemed oblivious to the long-toothed reptilian inside him. I had the same choice I always had—declare the man possessed and doom him to death, or lie and take my chances.
Ooohhh. Which will it be??
Nice hook. What will he choose?
Great hook! I want to know what he decided! 🙂
What does he decided? HOOKED!
Oh, what is her choice?! I must know…great hook.
Wow, that’s one tough choice! This is a powerful excerpt that definitely makes me want to read more.
Ah, what a great hook. I really want to know which one he/she will choose. And a post-apocalyptic dystopian story? That’s my kinda stuff. Can’t wait to read more.
What will she do, what WILL she do??? lol. Great hook
Very nice. What will she do?
You tease! 🙂 That’s a great hook.