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Today’s offering is from Wytchfae – Runes, the first book in the Wytchfae series. An intruder appears while Kelly is transitioning the ghost Cora to her afterlife:
A spirit demon. A scout for the Grims. Kelly’s blood froze. Her eyes locked with his lime-yellow ones, and the coyote growled. He bounded back and forth, saliva dripping from his immense jaws. Kelly knew he’d give his eyeteeth to get inside. He couldn’t, as long as she maintained control.
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Oooh! I love this. ‘Lime yellow eyes’ what a fabulous description. Great hook.
Oh dear…will she maintain control? I’d hate for the coyote to get in. Love the description, right down to the dripping saliva. Excellent hook…
Great Job! Short yet got me hooked.
Ooh, that’s scary! I’m hooked!
Lots of action and good visuals. I really enjoyed that hook!
You have a wonderful way of showing. I can picture in my mind everything that is going on. Great hook, Flossie.
Then she better maintain control b/c that is one scary beast. Great hook!
Great hook – I look forward to seeing what happens next!
Scary business. 🙂 Can’t wait to see what it does next.
Great description!
Things are heating up…nice hook!
Very intriguing hook 🙂
Sounds like she’s got her hands full. Hope she can pull through. Nice hook 🙂
Great hook…I loved the detail and description.
good description. good hook! 🙂
Jeeze Flossie! The Grim sounds terrifying! Does she maintain control?
almost horror like atmosphere. A great hook, Flossie!
very good Hook! Great descriptions!