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Faery witch Kelly and Viking ghost Ingvar time travel to ancient Norway in WYTCHFAE RUNES, encountering thugs along with true evil.
She dropped to the frozen ground and put her head in her hands. She could not help the tears that streamed down her cheeks but seemed torn from her gut. Ingvar taken by the Grims and she had not been able to stop it. This was all her fault. She should never have brought him here, thinking she could help him change the past and save his sister.“Well, if the chit is not already wailing like a widow,” a mocking voice said. She looked up. Hyge stood over her, his ghostly form swaying, his throat bloody and half torn out.
He must be a fright to look at but sounds like he could actually help under the right circumstances. I loved the snippet. A great hook, I really want to know how this scene continues.
EUGH!!! Great hook!
Oh no, what happened? They have to be alright!
Oh no! Sounds like she’s going to have no time to grieve. Great hook, and I love that cover! 🙂
Great hook. I could feel the emotion.
Oh my. After the wonderful tie you’ve shown between them the past couple of weeks…I can definitely feel her pain.
Wonderful hook, Flossie!
Great cover by the way! The ghost may be frightening, but will he help her? Great hook.
Interesting hook! I’m not usually a paranormal reader, but Wytchfae Runes intrigues me.
Oh! She’s in such pain!!
You have such an incredible imagination! I think you could be the next JK Rowling! (if you so choose…)
Wow thank you, Colette! That means a lot to me coming from you.