Welcome to the 15th Hump Day Hook of 2013. In this blog hop, each author posts one paragraph from a book or WIP. Find a list of HDH authors here. Everyone would appreciate a comment and for their post to be liked and tweeted, using the hashtag #HDH. Join the FB page here.
Since I am busy on edits for Wytchfae 2 – Guardian of the Deep, I wanted to stay in that world and decided to share a snippet from Wytchfae – Runes:
Whoosing from above, eerie creatures raced toward them. Rail thin and emaciated, their skin and bones appearance reminded Kelly of starved sewer rats. She gagged at their smell, even worse than the dank odor of the Grims. Their long curved teeth poked menacingly from sunken lips. The holes where their eyes should be were a dull black. They seemed a little like Grims, only creepier.
“What the hell are these things?”
Whoa! I’m outta here! LOL. What kind of place is this? Nice hook.
Creepy indeed! I’d be heading the other direction. Great hook! 🙂
Those things creeped me out big time. Great description!
Getting shivers just reading this one! Great hook D:
Getting shivers just reading this one. Great hook!
Oh…~shudder~ Creepy. Great description.
Yikes. They sound horrid. Great descriptions. I wouldn’t want to be near creatures like that. And indeed, I’m wondering what the hell they are too. Nice hook!
Oh wow, they sound horrible and terrifying! Super descriptions and great hook.