Welcome to Tuesday Tales, where writers use word and picture prompts in our stories. My current work in progress is a cozy mystery. This week’s word prompt is lamp. Events occur at the August Crow Hotel, Peri’s former childhood home, in Glisten, Georgia. When you finish reading my snippet, make sure to visit all the talented authors of Tuesday Tales.
We joined Dovie at a table in the tearoom. I inquired, “Did you reach the nurse?”
“She’ll call back.” Dovie selected a snickerdoodle.
The three of us sat in silence for a few moments, enjoying the spicy cookies and our hot drinks. Obviously, we were all in need of a restorative break. Out the large square windows facing the parking lot and woods beyond, fall masqueraded as a shy, retiring lady mincing her way across a shadowy, cloud-dimmed afternoon. It wouldn’t be long before she attained a more colorful vitality and jazzed up her appearance with touches of gold and scarlet. I had always looked forward to October in Glisten.
Dovie reached up and turned on a standing lamp made of hobnail milk glass. The light heightened her drawn features. “About Naomi Upshaw–I don’t know her well. I’ve only been in Glisten for a couple of months, as you know.”
Robin spoke up. “She’s a force of nature—founding member of the Heritage Club and active in numerous community activities.”
Dovie brushed crumbs from her chest. “I’m sure she insisted on coming with the committee to stay on top of anything that may affect the festival. Have you ever interviewed her for the Trumpet?”
“No, Bill tends to send Ollie for such features. He pampers her as if she’s Queen Victoria.”
“Dealing with the committee is one of the things needing to be handled while Jack is sick.”
Holding hands with the town matriarch hadn’t been in my lesson plan, but my godfather’s new wife was looking frazzled, and I wanted to set her mind at ease. “I’ll keep Mrs. Upshaw in the loop. It’s no bother. I’m sure Robin will help smooth the way as well.”
My friend gave me a look but nodded agreeably.
“Geez Louise!” Robin exclaimed, lurching from her seat. “That silver blue Jaguar belongs to Bon Bon Jarvis. Don’t tell me she’s part of the committee!”
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Flossie Benton Rogers, Conjuring the Magic with Spirited Stories
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Great scene. Can’t wait to meet Bon Bon Jarvis. Love the name.
Thanks, Susanne. Bon Bon is raring to go, apparently.
This right here is beautiful: ” fall masqueraded as a shy, retiring lady mincing her way across a shadowy, cloud-dimmed afternoon. It wouldn’t be long before she attained a more colorful vitality and jazzed up her appearance with touches of gold and scarlet.” Love it!! And I also love hobnail glass. I have a lamp like that. AND I love Robin’s expletive “Smash my pumpkins” — Nicely done. Jillian
I’m so glad you liked the fall personification, Jillian. Also the pumpkin line. I think that line just popped right out of her. Your lamp must be beautiful.
It is. I was going to take a pic to show you but I forgot. LOL!
You sound like me lol.
Great flow as always, Flossie. I got a kick out of “Smash my pumpkins!”, and the name Bon Bon Jarvis (coupled with a silver blue Jaguar) really has me intrigued!
Glad you liked smash my pumpkins and Bon Bon’s jazzy arrival. Thanks, Mae.
Love the lamp. Bon Bon Jarvis sounds really interesting.
Thanks. Bon Bon is an interesting person.
Absolutely lyrical writing! Beautiful And Bon Bon Jarvis — what a fantastic name. Looking forward to more.
Thanks so much!
I think she’s got her hands full. And Bon Bon Jarvis has me pulled between Bon Jovi and Iron Man. Lol! Great job!