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An interesting exchange occurred not long after Bon Bon left. Vonna Lacy rose and commented softly to Monty that she had to get back to help Curtis Jr. with the report software. I thought he would move to accompany her, since he and Spike had escorted her to Tea Thyme. Instead, he glanced at Kitty and then back to Vonna. He muttered to the woman standing beside his chair, “I’ll catch you later then.” Vonna’s lips tightened, and she twirled and moved stiffly toward the exit.
As she passed Spike, he sprang up. “I’ll walk with you.” He turned, gave a quick goodbye salute toward the general vicinity of our table, and hurried after Vonna. She was going ninety miles a minute and not waiting an iota for him, but he hustled and soon caught up with her. Halfway to the sidewalk, they pivoted and veered toward the copse of woods in the back. The woods continued for a ways and, on the far side, abutted a public park and parking area. I figured one or both of them had parked there earlier in the day. Maybe they were ride sharing or going for a drink.
Seeing Dovie’s paleness and anxious looks toward her sullen phone, I hoped the departures would be a cue for the group to disband and take their leave, but no such luck. Everyone was taking the opportunity to drink, munch, and chat, as if they hadn’t seen each other in months, which could not possibly be the case. Naomi Upshaw had entered a quiet but intense conversation with Dulcy Tolliver.
Robin’s thumbs flew over her phone. I squinted at the screen. She appeared to be composing today’s story. Using the phone for intricate composition was a skill I envied. I had yet to buy a tablet or phone smart enough to handle my ramblings. I still scribbled my research notes by hand on yellow legal pads.
I stood, intending to see if Luella’s thumbprint cookies were ready yet. I wasn’t hungry for more sweets, but I was nervous and it was something to do. Plus, I could check and see if she had calmed down. I would eventually have to speak to her about her railings against Vonna Lacy. A good question was, which woman was lying? Before I could move toward the hallway door, the light in the tearoom seemed to dim. My ears popped. An icy sliver trickled down my spine.
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Flossie Benton Rogers, Conjuring the Magic with Spirited Stories
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Another cliffhanger. Great job!
Thank you, Susanne!
Oh no! What is happening to her? I am on the edge of my seat. Great job!
Thanks! Glad you’re on the edge of your seat.
OMG! What a cliffhanger! I love the tension going on so subtly in the room. And what’s that about heading for the woods? Nothing good ever happens in the woods in suspense novels. Looking forward to finding out what’s going on. Great job of whetting my appetite for more.
I know, right?! Who in their right mind would park where they had to walk through the woods?
Testing to see who is lying will be fun! LOL! And it sounds like she may have an unwanted visitor there at the end. Great job! Jillian
Looks like that may be, if it’s who I think it is. We shall see. Thanks, Jillian!
YIKES, what a cliffie! I love it. Well done!
Thank you! Glad you liked it.
Oh, you’re so good at doing this! Leaving us hanging at the end, right when the tension notches up. You bad girl, you!
A great scene, as usual!
Heh heh. Thanks, Trisha.