It’s time for Tuesday Tales, April 25, 2023, where we use word and picture prompts in the stories we’re writing. I am working on a cozy mystery. Today’s word prompt is bright. We are still back in an earlier portion of the story, when Peri returns to Georgia due to her godfather’s medical condition. When you finish reading my snippet, make sure to visit all the talented authors of Tuesday Tales.
The following morning Dovie and I packed up our overnight things and checked out of the motel before heading to the hospital. Jack was the same. We had missed the attending doctor, who made rounds at the break of day. The nurse, however, informed us that he was scheduled to return later. I could tell Dovie was torn between staying to corner the doctor and ushering me to Glisten.
She wrung her hands. “It would be terrible for Jack to wake up and me not be there.”
I left it up to her. The main reason I wanted to head to the hotel was to get the initial jolt over with. My life had sure taken a weird turn.
Finally, she said, “Let’s go to Glisten and get you settled into the Augustus. We have plenty of time before evening visiting hours. I’ll relocate there as well. That is, if you don’t mind driving me back and forth to the hospital? I never missed not learning how to drive until now.”
“Of course, I don’t mind. I’ll be visiting Jack anyway. But are you sure he would want me to stay at the hotel?”
“Heavens, yes.” She massaged her forehead with fingertips, as if pressing away tension. “I’m afraid a lot of responsibility for the hotel project may fall on you, Peri, if you agree to take it on, that is. Jack didn’t let me in on a lot. He knew it was Greek to me.”
My eyes widened. “The work didn’t stop with his hospitalization?”
“Boss? You mean me?”
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Flossie Benton Rogers, Conjuring the Magic with Spirited Stories
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Great scene.
Thank you!
That ending left me grinning!
I’m glad the ending gave you a grin. Thanks for stopping by, Mae!
Great snippet!
Thanks!
I love it! Sudden elevation to boss over something she isn’t too familiar with! Great tension and expectation for twists and turns and adventure. Superb story. I’m enjoying it immensely.
I’m glad you are enjoying the story. Thank you, Jean!
Great job as always. Imagine arriving and being told- hey, you’re the boss, hope you do a good job. LOL! And I have been to Dahlonega. 🙂
Ooh, that last couple of lines has me intrigued. I can’t wait to see what comes. Great job!