It’s time for Tuesday Tales, April 18, 2023, where we use word and picture prompts in the stories we’re writing. I am working on a cozy mystery. Today’s word prompt is dirt. We are still back in an earlier portion of the story, when Peri returns to Georgia due to her godfather’s medical condition. When you finish reading my snippet, make sure to visit all the talented authors of Tuesday Tales.
“I don’t know the particulars, but the bank offered it dirt cheap on some kind of short sale.”
“Hmm. Marcella Strickland did mention to Robin and me that she wanted to move to Tennessee to be near her son.”
“Yes, evidently she has been after her husband to relocate for some time now.” She was quiet for a moment and then went on. “About lodging at the hotel after tonight, you know there’s plenty of space, and some of it is quite livable. Luella is in a downstairs bedroom. She had expected to be baking for the reopening in a few weeks.”
“Ahh, so Jack had a timeline?”
“Oh, yes, a very definite one. You know your godfather. Luella visited him this morning. Brought some mail.” She rummaged in her purse, drew out a batch of envelopes and frowned, before cramming them back in. She snapped it with a definite click. “Did you ever meet her?”
“No, I didn’t even know he had a cousin in this part of the world.”
“She came down from up north after finding him on a genealogy search. Please don’t ask me to explain all the begats of how they’re related, because it’s just too much. It makes my brain hurt.”
I turned my head for a glance. She looked as if she were about to scatter into pieces.
I said, “You don’t have to explain anything at all. There’s plenty of time for that later. Shall we get a bite to eat before we go on to the motel? Maybe Robin can finish work and meet us.”
She allowed me to persuade her, and we found a late-night diner. The tea and soup seemed to put color in her cheeks and prepare her for a night’s sleep. I was bone tired as well.
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Flossie Benton Rogers, Conjuring the Magic with Spirited Stories
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I love this line: She looked as if she were about to scatter into pieces.
A vivid description packaged in clever phrasing!
Thank you for appreciating the phrasing, Mae!
Great snippet as always!
Thank you!
Love the way you used the prompt. Clever. AND the line about scattering into pieces is perfect. Jillian
Thank you for the thoughtful comments, Jillian!
Again you tantalize us with hints at things to come. Now I need to hear the story of how they’re related. I think there’s probably something quite interesting in that story. This is great stuff, Flossie. I love your stories.
Oh, I’m glad you like my stories. Thanks for the support, Jean!
Oooh, I suspect there’s something more going on. Can’t wait to find out what it is. Good job!
Thank you, Tricia.
Oh, I’m itching to find out more. You always write with so many layers, Flossie. I know there’s another layer hiding in here.
Oh, thanks so much for your comment about layers.