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The following is from Wytchfae – Runes, the first book in the Wytchfae series. Faery witch Kelly is working hard to transition the spirit Cora to her afterlife, when intruders appear:
Kelly jumped as raging howls pierced the air. The coyote lunged at the Viking, who gripped hanks of fur. Her heart thumping, Kelly prayed the Viking kept the beast from tearing out his throat. With grunts and snarls, the two fell to the ground fighting. Harsh popping sounds drew Kelly’s attention from the battle. Electrical flares skittered across the circle, knocking Kelly and Cora to the 
ground.
Fantastic action! YEY!
Oooh! This is an action packed hook. Great stuff. Love it.
Love the action in this. Great hook!
Great hook, Flossie! The action was fantastic. I can’t wait to read this book.
The new banner is excellent! WooHoo!!
Loretta, thanks for sharing the magic of PP! Can’t wait to see yours.
Loved the excerpt! I’m a fan of paranormal fantasy romance too. Thank you!
interesting. great action. thanks for sharing! 🙂
C.R.
Very tense scene…nicely done. Great hook, as it left me wanting more.
An action packed hook! Nice!
That was intense! Well written! 🙂
Oooh, intense. What happened? Love the images you painted. 🙂
Blimey that is some swift action! Great hook.
So what happens when you throw a witch faery, a Viking, a spirit, and a coyote all together and then add some electrical flares? Chaos, that’s what, but written so very well. Great job! I could see everything as it was happening. I have to say, I would be scared if I was that coyote…you just don’t mess with a Viking. 😉 Great hook!
Very intense, gripping action. Well done!
Coyotes and Vikings! Terrific.
Very nice descriptions on the action. I can see it unfolding. Wonder if they’ll be able to fight off the coyote. Nice hook!
Thanks for sharing! Great paragraph!
Always love a good fight scene!
A good action scene always pulls me in. Nice hook!
Intense action scene. Nice job!
I was sucked right in to the action and wanted more. Great job!
Action, action! A great hook. I wanted to know why it was all happening.
Great hook! Lots of action. You did a great job. Thanks for the welcome to HDH!
Thank you!
So if he’s fighting the beast who is attacking the women? Great action!
Great action hook!